Tuesday, 4 August 2015

Lunchtime Writing Club

In Room 18 at St Martins School
We met a boy who was a fool
He was far too polite
Tried to teach us to write
So we chucked him right into the pool.

But his chances of death were rather slim
For we soon discovered that he could swim
And he couldn't have died
For the water had dried
So the odds were quite good for him.

By Louie H (Room 23)


4 comments:

  1. A really cool limerick there by Louie, he's got it so you read it and it has a rhythm to it. I remember doing them last year with Tim.

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  2. Awesome limerick! Love limericks, they bring so many spazzy ideas to you!

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  3. great limerick louie!!! awesome! (:
    -evelyn

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  4. Looks like a pretty cool club. Awesome poem Louie!
    Leila:)

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